This page contains a bunch of material to help you understand traditional plotting using mythologist Joseph Campbell's notion of "the hero's journey" or "the monomyth" from his book, "The Hero with a Thousand Faces." Do not think of this as a formula you must follow; in fact, this has kind of been done to death, as many critics suggest. It's also more useful for longer works than short stories. However, it's still perhaps the most-useful tool for helping you get past that point when you run into plot problems, or you feel you're forcing your characters to do something unnatural, or can't figure out why your story just feels flat. Enjoy, and here's hoping your protagonist drags your reader along on her journey!
First you'll see a few diagrams that show the journey visually, which I find really helps, and then you'll find a wonderful chart on the bottom of this page that analyzes how Star Wars and The Matrix used Campbell's monomyth.
Here's a simplified diagram:

Next up, a detailed diagram by Lisa A. Paltz Spindler:

Now one with great detail:

Finally, I love this gameboard-style depiction:

Next up, a nice analysis of two popular SF works and how they use Campbell's ideas, by the "Star Wars Origins" people.
Campbell |
Star Wars |
The Matrix |
|---|---|---|
I: Departure | ||
| The call to adventure | Princess Leia's message | "Follow the white rabbit" |
| Refusal of the call | Must help with the harvest | Neo won't climb out window |
| Supernatural aid | Obi-wan rescues Luke from sandpeople | Trinity extracts the "bug" from Neo |
| Crossing the first threshold | Escaping Tatooine | Neo is taken out of the Matrix for the first time |
| The belly of the whale | Trash compactor | Torture room |
II: Initiation | ||
| The road of trials | Light-saber practice | Sparring with Morpheus |
| The meeting with the goddess | Princess Leia (wears white, in earlier scripts was a "sister" of a mystic order) | The Oracle |
| Temptation away from the true path | Luke is tempted by the Dark Side | Cypher (the failed messiah) is tempted by the world of comfortable illusions |
| Atonement with the Father | Darth and Luke reconcile | Neo rescues and comes to agree (that he's The One) with his father-figure, Morpheus |
| Apotheosis (becoming god-like) | Luke becomes a Jedi | Neo becomes The One |
| The ultimate boon | Death Star destroyed | Humanity's salvation now within reach |
III: Return | ||
| Refusal of the return | "Luke, come on!" Luke wants to stay to avenge Obi-Wan | Neo fights agent instead of running |
| The magic flight | Millennium Falcon | "Jacking in" |
| Rescue from without | Han saves Luke from Darth | Trinity saves Neo from agents |
| Crossing the return threshold | Millennium Falcon destroys pursuing TIE fighters | Neo fights Agent Smith |
| Master of the two worlds | Victory ceremony | Neo's declares victory over machines in final phone call |
| Freedom to live | Rebellion is victorious over Empire | Humans are victorious over machines |
Common Mythic Elements | ||
| Two Worlds (mundane and special) | Planetside vs. The Death Star | Reality vs. The Matrix |
| The Mentor | Obi-Wan Kenobi | Morpheus |
| The Oracle | Yoda | The Oracle |
| The Prophecy | Luke will overthrow the Emperor | Morpheus will find (and Trinity will fall for) "The One" |
| Failed Hero | Biggs | In an early version of the script, Morpheus once believed that Cypher was "The One" |
| Wearing Enemy's Skin |
Luke and Han wear stormtrooper outfits | Neo jumps into agent's skin |
| Shapeshifter (the Hero isn't sure if he can trust this character) | Han Solo | Cypher |
| Animal familiar | R2-D2, Chewbacca | N/A |
| Chasing a lone animal into the enchanted wood (the animal usually gets away) | Luke follows R2 into the Jundland Wastes; The Millennium Falcon follows a lone TIE fighter into range of the Death Star | Neo "follows the white rabbit" to the nightclub where he meets Trinity |
And there it is, a pretty good introduction to Campbell's Hero's Journey; now start using this to analyze your own work. I hope you find this useful!
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